Backstory: The Story Behind the Second Dakota Stevens mystery, The Rich Are Different — Part 1

The nov­el that became The Rich Are Dif­fer­ent was writ­ten dur­ing the win­ter of 2001-02, over a year before I even con­ceived of the Dako­ta Stevens Mys­tery Series.

In order to give you a clear under­stand­ing of the back­sto­ry behind The Rich Are Dif­fer­ent, I need to tell you about what I was doing on 9/11 and dur­ing the months imme­di­ate­ly fol­low­ing that hor­ri­ble event.

In Sep­tem­ber 2001, I was work­ing for Mer­rill Lynch in Com­mu­ni­ca­tions, qui­et­ly hat­ing my job and bid­ing my time until HR offered me a buy­out pack­age. The man­ag­er who’d hired me—a ter­rif­ic guy and 20-year vet­er­an of the company—had been cal­lous­ly down­sized by his man­ag­er (as fate would have it, that woman was her­self down­sized soon fol­low­ing).

So, no longer hav­ing any inter­est in work­ing in Cor­po­rate Amer­i­ca, and want­i­ng to write fic­tion full-time, at my wife’s encour­age­ment I sub­mit­ted myself for a vol­un­tary sev­er­ance pack­age.

9/11 in Manhattan: Terrible and Surreal

The WFC South Tow­er, where I worked, in the days after 9/11. My office was on the 5th floor of the left-hand tow­er, just to the left of the giant Amer­i­can flag.

My office was on the fifth floor of the World Finan­cial Cen­ter South, with a view out the win­dow of the World Trade Cen­ter North Tow­er across the street and, if I craned my head, the South Tow­er.

Any­one who worked in Man­hat­tan on 9/11 has a sto­ry about their expe­ri­ences that day; suf­fice it to say, on that day I had begun a new work sched­ule, where I would start and end my day an hour lat­er, so on the morn­ing of 9/11, when the planes struck the tow­ers, I was on my way into the office. (By the way, a word about the sky that morn­ing: it was the deep­est blue I’ve ever seen, before or since.)

I reached Grand Cen­tral Ter­mi­nal and stum­bled over to Fifth Avenue, where I glimpsed the ris­ing smoke. Pedes­tri­ans stood in the mid­dle of the street, gap­ing at the night­mare, while hun­dreds of sirens scorched the air all around us. Swarms of fire trucks sped past us, blast­ing their horns, and raced down Fifth Avenue. Even then I knew the worst was still to come, and I wept for those fire­fight­ers because I knew that many of them wouldn’t make it back.

This post‑9/11 pho­to is the clos­est I’ve found to what that fire­fight­er looked like.

I’ll nev­er for­get see­ing this one fire­fight­er, rid­ing on the back of a long lad­der truck. He had all of his gear on, includ­ing his hel­met, but I could see his face, which was strong and res­olute, and then some women stand­ing in the crowd shout­ed with bro­ken voic­es for him to be care­ful, and I’ll nev­er for­get what he did: he held on to the truck with one hand and salut­ed the long line of pedes­tri­ans as the truck sped down­town. The women around me start­ed to sob. For me, that man will for­ev­er epit­o­mize a true hero.

This was the scene on one of the bridges, but hik­ing out of Man­hat­tan through Harlem was eeri­ly sim­i­lar.

I spent the rest of the day get­ting to my wife’s office in the Fash­ion Dis­trict, con­tact­ing friends and fam­i­ly by email to let them know I was still alive (the phone lines were jammed), watch­ing the North Tow­er col­lapse from the roof of my wife’s office build­ing, hik­ing up Broad­way at the head of a mass exo­dus (look­ing back over my shoul­der at the smoke plumes from Ground Zero and the con­tin­u­ous stream of peo­ple rolling over the hills of Upper Harlem, I knew on some small lev­el how Moses had felt), hik­ing miles ever north­ward up the island of Man­hat­tan, buy­ing bot­tled water at a bode­ga and call­ing my for­mer man­ag­er, who picked us up at a McDonald’s, just over the north­ern­most bridge off the island, in the Bronx.

In the months after that hor­ri­ble day, I began “work­ing” with Lou, a pro­gram­mer and sys­tems admin­is­tra­tor out of a for­mer­ly lit­tle-used Mer­rill field office in White Plains, NY, about 25 miles north of Man­hat­tan. When we first got there, the office had the feel of the Cold War-era gov­ern­ment bomb shel­ter in the third Ter­mi­na­tor movie. Lou and I were charged with mod­ern­iz­ing the office, get­ting it ready to accom­mo­date what exec­u­tive man­age­ment incor­rect­ly fore­saw as hun­dreds of dis­placed WFC work­ers want­i­ng to telecom­mute from the sub­urbs.

“Mr. Orcutt…some executives are needing concierging!”

While Lou installed desk­top com­put­ers and made sure the net­work was work­ing prop­er­ly, I ordered and over­saw the instal­la­tion of what I con­sid­ered impor­tant mod­ern office ameni­ties, includ­ing free cof­fee and soda machines, a pool table and a foos­ball table.

Basi­cal­ly, I mor­phed my job into that of a concierge, greet­ing skep­ti­cal exec­u­tives from Scars­dale and Green­wich who were “going to give this telecom­mut­ing thing a try.”

To aid me in my mis­sion, I recruit­ed a gor­geous blonde recep­tion­ist, a Dutch girl named Han­na Van Hast­ings. Pluck­ing her out of obscu­ri­ty in Pur­chas­ing, I gave her her dream job, which was doing noth­ing but fresh­en her make­up every two hours, answer the phone 5 or 6 times a day, pho­to­copy pages of the nov­el I was writ­ing, and bring exec­u­tives cof­fee if they asked for it.

A year or so lat­er, after I’d left Mer­rill, I heard through the grapevine that she had mar­ried one of the exec­u­tives who worked for a time at the White Plains office. She moved to Green­wich and had two chil­dren. It pleas­es me to know that, in a small way, I had some­thing to do with her hap­pi­ness.

For my part, once the exec­u­tives heard I was good at writ­ing, they asked me to write things for them, includ­ing short speech­es they had to give. I would make them prac­tice in front of me, in a closed con­fer­ence room, and give them notes. This work, which came at the tail end of my Mer­rill tenure, just before I final­ly received my sev­er­ance pack­age, served me well five years lat­er, when I began doing cor­po­rate speech­writ­ing in earnest.

But until then, there was that long win­ter of 2001-02 in White Plains. After less than a week of my “concierge” work in the updat­ed facil­i­ty, I real­ized I had about sev­en hours of free time every work day, so I start­ed writ­ing a new nov­el, right there in the office.

Mer­rill Lynch nev­er knew it, but for about nine months in 2001-02, they had a nov­el­ist on the pay­roll to the tune of $150,000/year. Suck­erzzzz!

This wasn’t the first book I’d writ­ten dur­ing my Mer­rill tenure. A year ear­li­er, I revised and pub­lished my first book of short sto­ries (I Hope You Boys Know What You’re Doing!) dur­ing down­time in my office.

While at the White Plains office, I hired a com­pa­ny Town Car to dri­ve me to my apart­ment and pick up my IBM Selec­tric type­writer, which I installed in an unused office, and there I worked all day long, unless Han­na called on the inter­com and said, “Mr. Orcutt, some exec­u­tives are need­ing concierg­ing!”

Miss Van Hast­ings was gor­geous, but Eng­lish was pos­i­tive­ly her sec­ond lan­guage.

And next week I’ll get into the nov­el itself, The Rich Are Dif­fer­ent.

 

By Chris Orcutt

CHRIS ORCUTT is an American novelist and fiction writer with over 30 years' writing experience and more than a dozen books in his oeuvre. Since 2015, Chris been working exclusively on his magnum opus. Bodaciously True & Totally Awesome: The Legendary Adventures of Avery “Ace” Craig is a 9-episode novel about teens in the 1980s. It’s about ’80s teens, but for adults (in other words, it’s decidedly not YA literature), and he’s applied this epic storytelling approach to the least examined, most misunderstood, most marginalized narrative space in American literature: the lives and inner worlds of teenagers.

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