{"id":54,"date":"2008-03-19T19:00:00","date_gmt":"2008-03-20T03:00:00","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/www.orcutt.net\/weblog\/?p=54"},"modified":"2025-03-02T18:25:37","modified_gmt":"2025-03-02T18:25:37","slug":"shut-up-hemingway","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/orcutt.net\/weblog\/shut-up-hemingway\/","title":{"rendered":"Shut Up, Hemingway"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<blockquote><p>&#8220;Writing is rewriting.&#8221; \u2014 Ernest Hemingway<\/p><\/blockquote>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p>Yeah, yeah, I know the story about the last chapter of Hemingway&#8217;s <em>A Farewell to Arms<\/em>\u2014that he allegedly rewrote it 39 times before he was satisfied with it.<\/p>\n<p>I say &#8220;allegedly&#8221; because I&#8217;ve also read accounts in which he rewrote the last <em>page<\/em> 39 times, and others in which he rewrote the entire <em>book<\/em> 39 times. More likely he drank 39 cocktails, shot 39 clay pigeons, caught 39 marlins and rewrote the same <em>word<\/em> 39 times.<\/p>\n<p>Why am I blathering on about Hemingway&#8217;s editorial habits? Because I&#8217;m in the middle (exactly the middle) of the SEVENTH draft of my new novel, and I&#8217;m getting a little tired of rewriting. I want to be&#8230;oh, I don&#8217;t know&#8230;WRITING something new, otherwise known as CREATING. I&#8217;ve been poring over individual sentences for two weeks, and the resulting effect on my eyes and brain is similar to <a href=\"http:\/\/en.wikipedia.org\/wiki\/Snow_blindness\" target=\"blank\">snow blindness<\/a>.<\/p>\n<p>Recently I read a quote by bestseller Michael Crichton about rewriting and <em>his<\/em> sense of despair about it. I was impressed that he&#8217;d gone on the record about this dreaded subject because I&#8217;ve found that a lot of very successful authors like to keep the production of their works a mystery to convey that it really isn&#8217;t all that hard. This is what I call the &#8220;writer as <a href=\"http:\/\/en.wikipedia.org\/wiki\/Auteur\" target=\"blank\">auteur<\/a>&#8221; or the &#8220;folks don&#8217;t want to see how the sausages are made&#8221; school of thought.<\/p>\n<p>Anyway, here&#8217;s what Crichton had to say (which doesn&#8217;t bode well for me\u2014there will probably be an 8th draft\u2014I&#8217;m used to it):<\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<blockquote><p>&#8220;Books aren&#8217;t written\u2014they&#8217;re rewritten&#8230;.It is one of the hardest things to accept, especially after the seventh rewrite hasn&#8217;t quite done it.&#8221;<\/p><\/blockquote>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p>Now if you&#8217;ll excuse me, I need to go decide whether to use a <a href=\"https:\/\/en.wikipedia.org\/wiki\/Periodic_sentence\" target=\"blank\">loose or periodic sentence<\/a> in the paragraph I&#8217;m working on.<\/p>\n<p>Hopefully I won&#8217;t have to rewrite the f-cker 39 times.<\/p>\n<p>Before I go, I want to leave you with an entirely different kind of Hemingway quote\u2014one that shows he wasn&#8217;t always Mr. Serious Writer:<\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<blockquote><p>&#8220;Got tight last night on absinthe. Did knife tricks.&#8221;\u00a0\u2014Hemingway, in a letter to a friend<\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p><\/blockquote>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>&nbsp; &#8220;Writing is rewriting.&#8221; \u2014 Ernest Hemingway &nbsp; Yeah, yeah, I know the story about the last chapter of Hemingway&#8217;s A Farewell to Arms\u2014that he allegedly rewrote it 39 times before he was satisfied with it. I say &#8220;allegedly&#8221; because I&#8217;ve also read accounts in which he rewrote the last page 39 times, and others &#8230; <a title=\"Shut Up, Hemingway\" class=\"read-more\" href=\"https:\/\/orcutt.net\/weblog\/shut-up-hemingway\/\" aria-label=\"Read more about Shut Up, Hemingway\">Read more<\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":3,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"closed","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[3,19,68,13,14],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-54","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","category-craft","category-fiction","category-rewriting","category-writers","category-writingexperiences"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/orcutt.net\/weblog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/54","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/orcutt.net\/weblog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/orcutt.net\/weblog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/orcutt.net\/weblog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/3"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/orcutt.net\/weblog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=54"}],"version-history":[{"count":4,"href":"https:\/\/orcutt.net\/weblog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/54\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":9152,"href":"https:\/\/orcutt.net\/weblog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/54\/revisions\/9152"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/orcutt.net\/weblog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=54"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/orcutt.net\/weblog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=54"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/orcutt.net\/weblog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=54"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}