{"id":54,"date":"2008-03-19T19:00:00","date_gmt":"2008-03-20T03:00:00","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/www.orcutt.net\/weblog\/?p=54"},"modified":"2025-03-02T18:25:37","modified_gmt":"2025-03-02T18:25:37","slug":"shut-up-hemingway","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/orcutt.net\/weblog\/shut-up-hemingway\/","title":{"rendered":"Shut Up, Hemingway"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<blockquote><p>\u201cWrit\u00ading is rewrit\u00ading.\u201d \u2014 Ernest Hem\u00ading\u00adway<\/p><\/blockquote>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p>Yeah, yeah, I know the sto\u00adry about the last chap\u00adter of Hem\u00ading\u00adway\u2019s <em>A Farewell to Arms<\/em>\u2014that he alleged\u00adly rewrote it 39 times before he was sat\u00adis\u00adfied with it.<\/p>\n<p>I say \u201calleged\u00adly\u201d because I\u2019ve also read accounts in which he rewrote the last <em>page<\/em> 39 times, and oth\u00aders in which he rewrote the entire <em>book<\/em> 39 times. More like\u00adly he drank 39 cock\u00adtails, shot 39 clay pigeons, caught 39 mar\u00adlins and rewrote the same <em>word<\/em> 39 times.<\/p>\n<p>Why am I blath\u00ader\u00ading on about Hem\u00ading\u00adway\u2019s edi\u00adto\u00adr\u00adi\u00adal habits? Because I\u2019m in the mid\u00addle (exact\u00adly the mid\u00addle) of the SEVENTH draft of my new nov\u00adel, and I\u2019m get\u00adting a lit\u00adtle tired of rewrit\u00ading. I want to be\u2026oh, I don\u2019t know\u2026WRITING some\u00adthing new, oth\u00ader\u00adwise known as CREATING. I\u2019ve been por\u00ading over indi\u00advid\u00adual sen\u00adtences for two weeks, and the result\u00ading effect on my eyes and brain is sim\u00adi\u00adlar to <a href=\"http:\/\/en.wikipedia.org\/wiki\/Snow_blindness\" target=\"blank\">snow blind\u00adness<\/a>.<\/p>\n<p>Recent\u00adly I read a quote by best\u00adseller Michael Crich\u00adton about rewrit\u00ading and <em>his<\/em> sense of despair about it. I was impressed that he\u2019d gone on the record about this dread\u00aded sub\u00adject because I\u2019ve found that a lot of very suc\u00adcess\u00adful authors like to keep the pro\u00adduc\u00adtion of their works a mys\u00adtery to con\u00advey that it real\u00adly isn\u2019t all that hard. This is what I call the \u201cwriter as <a href=\"http:\/\/en.wikipedia.org\/wiki\/Auteur\" target=\"blank\">auteur<\/a>\u201d or the \u201cfolks don\u2019t want to see how the sausages are made\u201d school of thought.<\/p>\n<p>Any\u00adway, here\u2019s what Crich\u00adton had to say (which does\u00adn\u2019t bode well for me\u2014there will prob\u00ada\u00adbly be an 8th draft\u2014I\u2019m used to it):<\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<blockquote><p>\u201cBooks aren\u2019t written\u2014they\u2019re rewritten.\u2026It is one of the hard\u00adest things to accept, espe\u00adcial\u00adly after the sev\u00adenth rewrite has\u00adn\u2019t quite done it.\u201d<\/p><\/blockquote>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p>Now if you\u2019ll excuse me, I need to go decide whether to use a <a href=\"https:\/\/en.wikipedia.org\/wiki\/Periodic_sentence\" target=\"blank\">loose or peri\u00adod\u00adic sen\u00adtence<\/a> in the para\u00adgraph I\u2019m work\u00ading on.<\/p>\n<p>Hope\u00adful\u00adly I won\u2019t have to rewrite the f\u2011cker 39 times.<\/p>\n<p>Before I go, I want to leave you with an entire\u00adly dif\u00adfer\u00adent kind of Hem\u00ading\u00adway quote\u2014one that shows he was\u00adn\u2019t always Mr. Seri\u00adous Writer:<\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<blockquote><p>\u201cGot tight last night on absinthe. Did knife tricks.\u201d&nbsp;\u2014Hem\u00ading\u00adway, in a let\u00adter to a friend<\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p><\/blockquote>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>&nbsp; \u201cWrit\u00ading is rewrit\u00ading.\u201d \u2014 Ernest Hem\u00ading\u00adway &nbsp; Yeah, yeah, I know the sto\u00adry about the last chap\u00adter of Hem\u00ading\u00adway\u2019s A Farewell to Arms\u2014that he\u2026<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":3,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"closed","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"wp_typography_post_enhancements_disabled":false,"footnotes":""},"categories":[3,19,68,13,14],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-54","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","category-craft","category-fiction","category-rewriting","category-writers","category-writingexperiences"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/orcutt.net\/weblog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/54","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/orcutt.net\/weblog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/orcutt.net\/weblog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/orcutt.net\/weblog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/3"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/orcutt.net\/weblog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=54"}],"version-history":[{"count":4,"href":"https:\/\/orcutt.net\/weblog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/54\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":9152,"href":"https:\/\/orcutt.net\/weblog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/54\/revisions\/9152"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/orcutt.net\/weblog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=54"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/orcutt.net\/weblog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=54"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/orcutt.net\/weblog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=54"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}