{"id":9060,"date":"2024-05-27T00:51:58","date_gmt":"2024-05-27T00:51:58","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/orcutt.net\/weblog\/?p=9060"},"modified":"2024-05-27T18:06:54","modified_gmt":"2024-05-27T18:06:54","slug":"another-draft-bites-the-dust","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/orcutt.net\/weblog\/another-draft-bites-the-dust\/","title":{"rendered":"Another Draft Bites the Dust"},"content":{"rendered":"\n

A month ago, I finished the third draft of what I\u2019m calling my \u201cteen epic.\u201d Between December 2023 and the end of April 2024, I cut 175,817 words (or 11.4%) from the 1.5 million-word manuscript, trimming it down to 1,365,148 words. The epic novel is now actually 10 novels, and my aim is to cut the gargantuan series by another 10 to 15% during the fourth draft, which I\u2019ll start on Tuesday after Memorial Day.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

All of this talk about numbers might make it seem like I’ve been doing nothing but cutting words, but I assure you there’s a lot more to it than that. I’m pleased with the finished third draft because over the past six months I really refined the story and accentuated the storylines that I want to be a part of the finished book and cut a lot of extraneous material that doesn’t drive the story forward to the conclusion I’ve envisioned for nine years now.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

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Part of my process over the past six months has been having the “computer lady” read the manuscript to me from my tablet. I’ve listened to my book for hundreds of hours while driving, working out, walking outdoors, etc.<\/em><\/p>\n<\/div><\/div>\n\n\n\n

That’s another thing: it struck me recently that I first started this series nine years ago, in the summer of 2015, when I made some initial notes on what I envisioned as a straightforward novel about teen experience in the 1980s. What started in the first draft as a partially autobiographical story has since developed into a 10-volume “teen epic” about a group of fictional teens in the years 1985-87.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Recently I did all of my ’80s fact-checking for the fourth draft, and in addition to correcting matters of fact in the next draft I’ll be shaping the elephantine manuscript (now 4000 letter-sized pages) into 10 distinct novels.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

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The author as his alter-ego, editor Max Perky (with apologies to his editor idol, the great genius Max Perkins).<\/em><\/p>\n<\/div><\/div>\n\n\n\n

Novel-writing is about drafts. Most readers know nothing about how novels are actually put together and therefore think that the novelist simply sits down and types out a story that\u2019s in his head, and the result is printed and bound and sold in bookstores. If only it were that easy. The reality is that writing a novel is a constant flux of building up and tearing down. You might spend weeks or months writing a section of a novel only to discover later on that the section is merely scrollwork or a preamble to the real story.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

You then spend days, weeks or months cutting the parts that don\u2019t fit and writing new material that improves on the previous draft or goes in a new direction altogether. The point is, while the reader gets to experience the finished, polished product (without the stops and starts of construction), as the builder, the novelist has to keep building and tearing down while constantly revising and refining (and compromising on) his vision for the finished product.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

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The author taking a short break with his best friend, Dashiell Hammett. Photo by the author’s other best friend, Jason Scott.<\/em><\/p>\n<\/div><\/div>\n\n\n\n

The process reminds me a little bit of Thomas Jefferson\u2019s home, Monticello, in Charlottesville, Virginia. Today when visitors to Monticello see the house and surrounding plantation, they\u2019re seeing the finished product: a beautiful Neoclassical (style) mansion with Jefferson\u2019s \u201cgadgety\u201d architectural touches (like the dumbwaiter that brought food upstairs from the kitchens to the dining room).<\/p>\n\n\n\n

What visitors don\u2019t see is the half dozen iterations that the main house went through. In fact, if you read a biography of Jefferson about his architectural ambitions, you\u2019ll see that his original vision for the mansion bears no resemblance whatsoever to the finished one, the one we see today. It took Jefferson multiple \u201cdrafts\u201d until he finally figured out his ultimate vision for the place, and, sadly (for him and his slaves that built it), Monticello wasn\u2019t completed in his lifetime.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

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While I edited the third draft, my wife bought, painted and assembled these shelves for 15 of my 20 typewriters.<\/em><\/p>\n<\/div><\/div>\n\n\n\n

When I\u2019m in the middle of a draft, I don\u2019t do much reading of other writers; I usually don\u2019t have time. During the third draft, for example, in order to cut 175,817 words from the second draft in 152 days (an average of 1,157 words cut per day), I had to work between 10 and 14 hours per day every day. The point is, I barely have enough time to read and revise my own work, so I\u2019m not able to do any pleasure reading during a draft, and instead have to cram in all my reading between drafts.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

During this most recent break, I\u2019ve reread a number of books including John Irving\u2019s The World According to Garp<\/em>, Stephen Ambrose\u2019s Undaunted Courage<\/em> (about the expedition of Lewis and Clark), F. Scott Fitzgerald\u2019s The Great Gatsby<\/em>, and John Steinbeck\u2019s Travels with Charley<\/em>. The aim is always to read (or reread) work that is different from what I\u2019ve been immersed in for the previous months so I can forget my own writing. I need to forget my own work so when I return to it, it will be fresh, and the bad stuff will stick out.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

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Editing on the back porch with Mr. Hammett. Note the reading glasses, red pen and ubiquitous cup of coffee.<\/em><\/p>\n<\/div><\/div>\n\n\n\n

During this break, I\u2019ve also refilled the well by watching the entire TV series, Columbo<\/em>. What a magnificent mystery series, and what a great character Peter Falk created! As a longtime aficionado of Sherlock Holmes, I can state with authority that Detective Lieutenant Columbo (we never learn his first name) is the second-best fictional detective.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

What started out as a brief, clear report on my progress on the third draft has meandered into irrelevant territory. What was it that I originally wanted to say?<\/p>\n\n\n\n

I guess the impetus for me writing this blog\/journal entry in the first place was to document the feelings of doubt during the third draft, and the questions I\u2019ve had about my own sanity. I can\u2019t tell you, for example, how many days I\u2019ve woken up and wondered if I was crazy to continue working on a 10-novel \u201cteen epic\u201d that takes place in the mid 1980s. Almost daily at the breakfast table, I\u2019ve moaned to my wife and muse, \u201cWho the hell is going to want to read this stuff?\u201d<\/p>\n\n\n\n

\u201cA lot of people,\u201d she replies. \u201cThere are millions of people our age and older who want to go back to a simpler time, before social media and the internet, before all of these wars and mass shootings and political unrest. There\u2019s a readership out there that is starving for nostalgia, to be taken back to when they had very few responsibilities, and the world just made sense. You’re going to be giving readers a time machine back to the 1980s, and at ten dollars per novel it’s going to be the cheapest time machine they’ll ever find. You have to keep going, Chris. Your books are going to scratch an itch they didn\u2019t even know they had.\u201d<\/p>\n\n\n\n

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The Hudson River near its headwaters in the Adirondacks. Two of the 9-10 episodes of my teen epic take place in Adirondack Park.<\/em><\/p>\n<\/div><\/div>\n\n\n\n

She\u2019s right of course. So, on Tuesday, May 28\u2014the day after Memorial Day\u2014my submarine, the U.S.S. Bodacious, will submerge again for 218 days\u2014until end of business on December 31. That is the amount of time I\u2019m giving myself to finish the fourth draft.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

I have several aims for the fourth draft. The prime directive is to shape each of the 10 episodes into a novel that can stand on its own, with its own plot and character arcs, climax and denouement. The second goal for the fourth draft is to cut away irrelevant characters and material\u2014any stuff that leads away from what the series is ultimately about. Third, I need to refine the novel and chapter openings. Fourth, I need to more skillfully weave in mentions of current events and make corrections to matters of fact. And finally, this is the draft in which I want to make the language really sing.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

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My wife’s birthday gift to me: a JBL boombox so I can listen to the ’80s soundtrack of the series while I’m writing, editing, working out or even showering.<\/em><\/p>\n<\/div><\/div>\n\n\n\n

While I\u2019m submerged, I\u2019ll see a handful of people very seldom, I\u2019ll go on a couple working vacations (meaning I travel someplace, like to a cabin on a lake in the Adirondacks, and keep working), and I won\u2019t watch or listen to any<\/em> news about what\u2019s going on in the world. Because this is a Presidential election year, invariably there will be a lot of social unrest, protests, riots, etc., but to complete my epic series, I have to block all of that out and focus exclusively on the events, music, TV, movies, and culture of 1985-1987.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

You’ll hear from me again in January 2025, when I resurface briefly before the fifth and final draft. I’m setting a publication date of January 2026, which means that pre-orders for the epic series will start in November of next year, and I’ll actually be starting advance publicity for the series this winter.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

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Mr. Dashiell Hammett (a.k.a., “Dash”) mugging for the camera at a cafe table at our favorite restaurant, Momiji hibachi in Rhinebeck, NY.<\/em><\/p>\n<\/div><\/div>\n\n\n\n

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As you can see by this clearly 100% real photo (AI had nothing to do with it), I also took a couple weeks off earlier this month to visit the Himalaya and climb Mount Everest (with apologies to Sir Edmund Hillary and Tensing Norgay).<\/em><\/p>\n<\/div><\/div>\n\n\n\n

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